ABOUT FORWARD TO CAMELOT: 50th ANNIVERSARY EDITIONWHERE WERE YOU THE DAY KENNEDY WAS SAVED? On the 50th anniversary of the JFK assassination comes a new edition of the extraordinary time-travel thriller first published in 2003, now extensively revised and re-edited, and with a new Afterword from the authors. On November 22, 1963, just hours after President Kennedy’s assassination, Lyndon Johnson was sworn in as President aboard Air Force One using JFK’s own Bible. Immediately afterward, the Bible disappeared. It has never been recovered. Today, its value would be beyond price. In the year 2000, actress Cady Cuyler is recruited to return to 1963 for this Bible—while also discovering why her father disappeared in the same city, on the same tragic day. Finding frightening links between them will lead Cady to a far more perilous mission: to somehow prevent the President’s murder, with one unlikely ally: an ex-Marine named Lee Harvey Oswald. Forward to Camelot: 50th Anniversary Edition brings together an unlikely trio: a gallant president, the young patriot who risks his own life to save him, and the woman who knows their future, who is desperate to save them both. History CAN be altered …
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Cutting It Down to
By Susan Sloate
getting words down on paper in the first place, cutting what’s already there should be a snap, right?
Didn’t Michelangelo say airily, “I just took a chisel and cut away everything
that wasn’t David”?
Well, that sounds
simple enough. You drop an extraneous phrase here, a flabby sentence there—and
suddenly your manuscript is ten pages shorter and muscular. Nothing to it,
I hadn’t realized
how much I needed to do it until I began a much-needed revision this summer on
FORWARD TO CAMELOT, the 2003 time-travel thriller I co-authored with Kevin
Finn. We both loved the book as originally written, but with a new edition
about to be published (commemorating the 50th anniversary of the
Kennedy assassination, which is the subject of our novel), we felt it was a
good time to fix some of the usage and grammar errors that had slipped by us
the first time, and especially to correct a couple of small historical errors
that had bothered me for ten years.
That was the
intention: make sure the quotation marks face the right way, check the history
and turn in the book to our publisher.
Then Kevin and I began to realize there were
other issues we wanted to address. What started as a simple fix became a
line-by-line scrutiny, and what we eventually found were the words, sentences
and even paragraphs we could cut to bring down the length. Our publisher, Drake
Valley Press, explained gently that a book as long as the original version
(almost 500 printed pages) would cost so much that we might not see any profit
on it at all in paperback, and it could affect eBook sales as well. But if we
could significantly reduce the word count, we would do a lot better. And
besides, the narrative really did have its flabby moments. Keep the story, by
all means—just make it, you know, a lot shorter and simpler.
I began to feel
as though I had an “Everything Must Go!” sign on my computer screen.
While I began the
historical fixes, Kevin began streamlining the manuscript, pulling out sections
he felt could safely be cut or linked while maintaining the pace, the plot and
the flavor of the original. While we both resisted cutting entire scenes—we cut
only one full scene, albeit reluctantly—there were certain scenes that we also
wanted to rewrite; we hadn’t got them right in 2003 and we had another chance
But when I
finally saw Kevin’s long, meticulous (did I mention long?) document listing all
the changes—which ran about 30 pages—I almost cried. Then began the
bargain-with-your-partner phone calls: “Look, we can’t cut the hunt scene at
“But it’s ten
pages; that’s way too long.”
“I’ll cut it down, if I can keep the gist of
“You can have the
gist. Just get rid of the gristle!”
“Did you realize
you write everything twice?” Kevin asked me. “If you could cut it down to one
telling, we could really cut through this manuscript.” By this time the word
‘cut’ or ‘slash’ made me queasy.
We argued, and we
both agreed to less than what we wanted. Kevin let me keep the plot intact; I
swallowed a good deal of bile and pride and slashed away at anything that
wasn’t strictly necessary.
We cut the
488-page original manuscript to 382 pages, losing 25,000 words in the process. The
word count was in the ballpark, and our publisher was relieved.
Did I enjoy the
process? Not losing my favorite bits, no. But I did like examining a paragraph
and finding the heart of it. It’s a process writers need to go through all the
time—understand what we want to say and say it as effectively—and as simply—as
we can. We can never afford to forget that part of our process, especially writers
who become very successful, and whose editors then mysteriously evaporate (or
more likely, are intimidated or overpowered by the author at that point).
I know I’ll do
the same process from now on: I’ll look for stuff I’ve said twice and hack away
at it, along with everything else the reader doesn’t absolutely need to know.
And maybe that
snob Michelangelo was right: when you finish slashing with your machete, what
you end up with looks a lot less like a flabby ‘before’ picture and a lot more
like that glistening David in marble.
That alone makes
Good luck with
your own machete …
ABOUT SUSAN SLOATESUSAN SLOATE is the author of 20 previous books, including the recent bestseller Stealing Fire and Realizing You (with Ron Doades), for which she invented a new genre: the self-help novel. The original 2003 edition of Forward to Camelot became a #6 Amazon bestseller, took honors in three literary competitions and was optioned by a Hollywood company for film production. Susan has also written young-adult fiction and non-fiction, including the children’s biography Ray Charles: Find Another Way!, which won the silver medal in the 2007 Children’s Moonbeam Awards. Mysteries Unwrapped: The Secrets of Alcatraz led to her 2009 appearance on the TV series MysteryQuest on The History Channel. Amelia Earhart: Challenging the Skies is a perennial young-adult Amazon bestseller. She has also been a sportswriter and a screenwriter, managed two recent political campaigns and founded an author’s festival in her hometown outside Charleston, SC.
After beginning his career as a television news and sports writer-producer, KEVIN FINN moved on to screenwriting and has authored more than a dozen screenplays. He is a freelance script analyst and has worked for the prestigious American Film Institute Writer’s Workshop Program. He now produces promotional trailers, independent film projects including the 2012 documentary SETTING THE STAGE: BEHIND THE SCENES WITH THE PIRATES OF PENZANCE, and local content for Princeton Community Television. His next novel, Banners Over Brooklyn, will be released in 2014. For updates and more information about Forward to Camelot: 50th Anniversary Edition, please visit http://susansloate.com.